fall from grace

The ending was ill thought out. The world building had collapsed leading to the writer suffering from an ending that only further destroyed the story. The ultimate evil was surrounded by plot convenience and stilted character development.

Though the monster creation was still excellent, the main characters were enjoyable and there were elements in the story that could have been developed into something interesting. The main story fell apart to the point of it being frustrating. If another story is released to follow this, it will likely suffer more problems due to how the unresolved problems seem even more poorly written. The story suffered from illl thought out madness.

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great book

I have really enjoyed all the books so far and in sure at this stage that I will enjoy the last one.

this serie was a great surprise. I have came across it by accident.

highly recommended

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ow the puns and referances...

so there you are just enjoying yourself listening to your audio book, when suddenly you hear a word/sentence you recognise.
then you shoot into a smirk or laugh at the seemingly weird timing wich breaks the tension perfectly.

after i had finished the previous book i was itching to continue and i was not dissappointed.

so... of course i bought the next bookXD. i like this serie as much as the guild codex series. these both help me concentrate durring work:p.

im realy looking forward to the rest:3.

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Constantly great

very enjoyable story with great narration. I can never seem to stop listening once I start! highly recommended.

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Wow

The epilogue got me. I'm still shivering and I almost saw it coming.

If you've enjoyed it so far, there is no reason you won't enjoy this. The story took a slight diversion away from dungeon building but it was clear that all of this was planned. So good.

Where's the final book?

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Excelente!!

Q buena historia deberian hacer algun tipo de alarma o correo q avise cuando salga la version audible del siguiente libro, BRavo dakota excelente serie y la narración no pudo ser mejor

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More!!

Why? Why did it end there? I really, really want the next book now! 😁
As you can guess I loved it, excellent story line and the reading was good as always. I love the characters of Cal and Dale they complement each other perfectly.

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I really enjoyed it

I have enjoyed all of the series and only one thing isn’t sitting right so no info that will spoil but at the end of the last book dale had the elves cultivation technique but didn’t have in the middle of this one a small detail and explainable by the squishy human brain but I’d would of implemented it almost immediately I think dale would too

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4th time and still caught

(From my review of the first book)
I listened to this series as a whole pretty quickly. It captivated me and made me wonder how it'd continue. The alternating POV was also nice and felt natural throughout, with the writing distinct enough between the characters that you didn't doubt whose eyes you were looking through. Every choice the characters made, made me switch between liking them, being annoyed and even shocked, which I love.
The whole RPG system is also used in a way that makes it feel much more 'natural' compared to the free-floating-screen type of RPG that can feel very unnatural to some, so if that is what turns you away from LitRPGs then you can try this one out without worry.
I loved Vikas Adam as a narrator when I got used to it, since it was the first time I heard a narrator which made each voice much more unique than I had heard so far. At first, I was confused and thought that 2 people were narrating (which I am not the biggest fan of) but he just has amazing control of his voice.

I recommend giving it a go!

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Where is The nexr one

Though it would stop at book 3. Then a 4th came and now i think a 5th might be in the making.. I hope so.

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